lualm
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lyrics, poems and verses dedicated to jae heeif u have any songs or poems bursting in your hearts , dedicate it to jae hee here in this thread...
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lualm
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Never My Love
You ask me if there'll come a time
when I grow tired of you;
never my love, never my love.
You wonder if this heart of mine
will lose its desire for you;
never my love,
never my love.
What makes you think love will end
when you know that my whole life
depends on you?
You say you fear I'll change my mind
I won't require you,
Never my love,
never my love.
How can you think love will end
when I've asked you to spend your
whole life with me?
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Raymond
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here is mine:
Emma Bunton - Free Me Lyrics
Being with you
longing for something to happen
biding my time
hoping to get a reaction
atmosphere's tense
heavy with anticipation
don't leave me here
with only my imagination
chorus
free me
now free me
let me loose to love you
Yeah how i long to seduce you oh
free me
let me loose to love you
Yeah how i long to seduce you now
How long can I continue to suffer in silence?
my aching heart can't bear to awaiting such suspense
so baby it's time to tell you just how I am feeling
'cause full-on desire I have too long been concealing
chorus
free me
now free me
let me loose to love you
Yeah how i long to seduce you oh
free me
let me loose to love you
Yeah how i long to seduce you now
free me
free me
chorus (x2)
free me
now free me
let me loose to love you
Yeah how i long to seduce you oh
free me
let me loose to love you
Yeah how i long to seduce you now
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Raymond
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And now I'm all alone again
Nowhere to turn, no one to go to.
Without a home, without a friend
without a face to say hello to
But now the night is near
And I can make-believe he's here
Sometimes I walk alone at night
When everybody else is sleeping
I think of him and then I'm happy
With the company I'm keeping
The city goes to bed
And I can live inside my head
On my own
Pretending he's beside me
All alone
I walk with him 'til morning
Without him, I feel his arms around me
And when I lose my way, I close my eyes and he has found me
In the rain
The pavement shines like silver
All the lights are misty in the river
In the darkness, the trees are full of starlight
And all I see is him and me forever and forever
And I know it's only in my mind
That I'm talking to myself and not to him
And although I know that he is blind
Still I say there's a way for us
I love him
But when the night is over
He is gone
The river's just a river
Without him, the world around me changes
The trees are bare and everywhere the streets are full of strangers
I love him
But every day I'm lonely
All my life I've only been pretending
Without me, his world will go on turning
The world is full of happiness that I have never known
I love him
I love him
I love him...
But only on my own...
(sniffle)
:'(
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Raymond
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I'm not really good at poetry, but here it is...
Reaching Out
written by Raymond Cauilan
Written for Lee Hyun Kyun
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Everyday I woke up smiling
Just thinking of you
My day would be incomplete
Without seeing you...
Why do I feel this way?
Will I be able to have you my way?
You don't even know me at all
Absolute impossibility is what I'm after for
I am not your mother
I am not your brother either
But you have given me something to remember
Remembering all the things you've achieved
A pricelss smile is what I can only give
This is not a love song
But I am full of adoration
Your smile, your face,
Your lips, Every move that you make
They are now a part of me
A part that I will keep inside of my heart
I truly Adore you
Everything I will do just for you
You truly are my inspiration
I will forever be full of adoration
I'm reaching out my hands
Please try to understand
You have given me something to remember
Something I will keep forever
I can have you
But Ican't hold you
I can see you
But I can't reach you
But still...
Thank you for coming into my life
There's definitely no need to deny
You always put a smile on my face
Someone that no one can replace
Thank you...
Korean translation I got:
당신을 생각하는 것 만으로
매일 저는 미소지으며 잠에서 깨어납니다
당신을 볼 수 없다면
저의 나날은 불완전할거에요
왜 이렇게 느껴지는 걸까요?
당신을 제게 오게 할 수 있는 걸까요?
당신은 저를 전혀 모릅니다
제가 추구하는 것은 절대 불가능한 것일 뿐이에요
전 당신의 어머니가 아닙니다
역시 당신과 형제지간도 아닙니다만
당신은 제게 기억할 만한 그 무엇을 주었습니다
당신이 이룬 모든 것들을 되새겨보면
제가 드릴 수 있는 것은 소박한(liberal translation of Priceless) 미소 뿐이죠
이것은 사랑 노래는 아니지만
전 사모하는 마음으로 가득 차 있습니다
당신의 미소, 당신의 얼굴,
당신의 입술, 당신이 짓는 모든 움직임
이들은 이젠 제 일부입니다..
제 마음 깊이 간직할게 될 부분이죠
진심으로 당신을 사모합니다
오직 당신을 위해서 제가 앞으로 할 모든 것이죠
당신은 진정 제게 영감을 주는 존재입니다
저는 영원히 사모하는 마음으로 가득 차 있을거에요
제가 당신께 닿으려고 손 내밀고 있는 것을
이해해 주세요
당신은 기억할 만한 그 무엇을
영원히 간직하게 될 그 무엇을 제게 주었습니다.
당신을 가질 수는 있지만
당신을 잡을 수는 없어요
당신을 볼 수는 있지만
당신께 닿을 수는 없어요
그래도 여전히....
제 삶에 와주셔서 감사합니다
거부할 필요는 없죠
그 누구도 대신할 수 없는 사람인
당신은 언제나 저를 미소 짓게 해요
고마워요...
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polabola
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eyes deeply imbeded in the skies
watches over the world below
never fading, shining sorrow
touching and healing the deepest lies
~polabola dedicated to Jae Hee's expressive eyes
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lualm
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polabola...what a poem...and you say you're not good at writing??? short but meaningful...atta girl...
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Raymond
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| polabola wrote: | eyes deeply imbeded in the skies
watches over the world below
never fading, shining sorrow
touching and healing the deepest lies
~polabola dedicated to Jae Hee's expressive eyes |
more!!!!
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polabola
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^^ thanks for the complement, really, I have miles to go lol 
Mirror
The reflection I see in front of me
lives a being I've been wishing for eternity
Not a mere perfection of the hands that created me
an opposing truth conceived by testimony
the greatness cannot be denied
my beliefs have been fortified
which in front of me I admired
the embodiment of a soul that stands
my other half holding my crystal hands
taking me away to dangerous and unfamiliar lands.....
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Raymond
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i'm not really good at potery but I find lyric potery really fun.
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wintersky18
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Polabola: you're just great!!! heheheh  more...more...
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lualm
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polabola...what a poem...each word is written so beautifully....more more more!!!
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ilaria82
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Me too!!I wanna more,your words are really touching!!Loving them!! 
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polabola
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awww thanks for the praise and all  hehehe I will try to make more lol
a sweet poem dedicated to Jae Hee
When I...
When I walked alone someone walked along with me
When I can't talk, someone talked to me
When I can't touch, someone touched me
When I can't feel, someone loved me
When I can't see, someone created visions for me
When I can't see the light, someone lighted up to guide me
When I am frozen, someone melted me
that somone could just be anybody
Undeniably, it's Jae Hee, my one and only
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lualm
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this one sends shiver to my spine...you should send it to jae hee !!! or have it posted in cafe.daum where he visits from time to time...
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wintersky18
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Shocks! I agree with lualm!!! Gosh Polabola, this is really ....oh!! I'm out of adjectives to describe it...hehehehe but it's really beautiful!
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ilaria82
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I totally agree too!I bet he'd be so moved!!Have u ever thought about publishing them??U're really amazing and I think u can give smt really precious with ur words to whte world^^I'm meaning it!!
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polabola
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^^ nah never thought of publishing them or sending them to Jae Hee himself lol, but since lualm suggested it, I might give it a try hehehee
You gals are all complimenting my writing skills, but honestly, I suck at interpreting poems, and I haven't been getting a lot of responses of my fanfiction (which is related to My Girl)...that's a fact lol.
I plan to write a Lee Mong Ryong and Han Chae Young fan fiction if I feel good about my other fan fiction hehehehe ^_^
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Raymond
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anyone knows this song?
RIHANNA
S.O.S. (Rescue Me)
[Intro]
Lalala lalala la la lala la Ohhh
You know I never felt like this before
Lalala lalala la la lala la Ohhh
Feels like something real
[Verse 1]
I'm obessive when just one thought of you comes up
I'm agressive just one thought of closing up
You got me stressing, incessantly pressing the issue
Da very moment gone you know I miss you
I'm the question an you of course the answer
Just hold me close boy cause I'm your tiny dancer
You make me shaken up, heads are mistaken
But I can't control myself got me calling out for help
[Chorus (2x)]
S.O.S. please someone help me. Its not healthy for me to feel this
Y.O.U. are making this hard, I can't take it see it don't feel right
[Bridge]
This time please someone come and rescue me
Cause you or my mind got me losing it
I'm lost you got me lookin for the rest of me (just testing me) but still I'm losing it
This time please someone come and rescue me cause you or my mind got me losing it
I'm lost you got me looking for the rest of me, got the best of me, so now I'm losing it
[Verse 2]
Just your presence and I second guess my insanity
Yes its a lesson and its based on my vanity
My tummy's up in knots sone as I see you I get so hot
Common sense if out the door can't seem to find a lot
Take me (uh huh) you know inside you feel it right
Take me I'ma put desire in your arms tonight
I'm out with you, ya got me head over heels
Boy you got me hanging on by the way you make me feel
[Chorus (1x)]
[Bridge]
Boy you know you got me feeling open
And boy your loves enough with words unspoken
I said boy I'm feeling you, you got me open
I don't know what to do its true
I'm going crazy over you I'm begging
[Chorus (1x)]
[Bridge (2x)]
[Outro]
Lala lala lala lala Ohhh
Ohh ohh lala lala lala lala oh oh
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polabola
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I like that song!!! it's really catchy hehehehe
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sassyging
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Wow!!! Polabola!!! Such great poems!!! I like them!!! weeh... I'm not good in writing poems (especially in English) but I write too... It's just when my disease attacks again... (this is the time when many ideas come and go on my mind and i need to write them down...hahha.... )
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polabola
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sassyging: just post here and share your thoughts, I think magaling kanaman eh
I'm feeling too poetic today lol since I've seen 3 Iron
Invisible
by Polabola (inspired by 3 Iron)
One day I ran into myself
seen a man who I never knew
I look into each of his features
A totally different creature
[chorus]
I don't know where's my place
I don't know where I lie
I'm just invisible in everyone's eyes
I'm just nobody
watching over
Until somobody saw me
A wandered alone in the streets
Looking for shelter and a place
Eating whatever in such haste
Still homeless, hopeless and highly disgraced
When I feel somone's loving face
I ran to comfort and praise her
I'm still not seen nor softly yeard
I confine to myself and to her word
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lualm
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pola, i just have to be your official cheerer...u want a banner or a dance number???
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polabola
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^^ no need to cheer lol  thanks for the comment. I enjoy constructive criticisms...
hwag kang mainis sa akin lol
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ilaria82
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Lualm, can I join u in polabola's fanclub???I so adore what u write!!!
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sassyging
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^-^ weeh... polabola... i just love the poem... (INVISIBLE)... so great...!!! the first stanza really struck me... weeh... i suddenly remember the 3-iron scenes...
hmmm... last night while i cant sleep, i suddenly remember jh's eyes...and my disease start to attack again... hehe...
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Kakaibang Nilalang
Isang nilalang ang isinilang sa kanyang mga mata...
Isang nilalang na di na nawala sa kanya...
At hanggang ngayon, ako pa ri'y nagtataka...
Ano kaya itong nilalang sa kanyang mga mata?
Akala ko noong una'y isa itong leon...
Na tila mangangain kapag nagalit yaon...
Ngunit biglang nagulat nang siya'y tumawa...
Tila isang anghel ang aking nakita...
Ilang sandali lamang ako'y naluha...
Tila naging isang batang 'di matigil sa pag-uha...
Matapos ang ilang saglit, nakaramdam na ako ng takot...
Nakikita ko sa mga mata niya'y nangangatog na tuhod...
Hanggang ngayon tuloy ay nag-iisip...
Ni hindi man lamang ako makaidlip...
Ano kayang uri ng nilalang ang naroon?
Ano kaya talaga iyon?
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(translations... Just bear with me... I'm not good with it...)
Unknown Creature
An unknown creature was born in his eyes...
An unknown creature who never leaves his side...
Until now I'm still very curious...
What could that creature be in his eyes?
I once thought it was a lion...
That's ready to fight when it gets mad...
But I was surprised when i see him laugh...
An angel seems to appear in his eyes...
But after a while, tears fall from my eyes...
It seems that I saw a child who never stops to cry...
But after a while I become scared...
When I saw in it, some knees shaking so hard...
Until now, I'm still thinking...
And I still can't sleep...
What kind of creature lives in there?
What kind of creature could that be?
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polabola
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^^ nicely done sassyging!!! I love the mystery with of your poem. It seems like the persona is curious and drawn to the creature (Jae Hee). I love it ^_^
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lualm
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hey sassyging...you also have a talent in writing...pls do share more of your works just like polabola...the poem is laced with mystery in each stanza...
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Raymond
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how come the poem I wrote was not even noticed? "atention seeker" I even got it translated in korean language. "cries"
LOL!
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nice poem sassyging! yay you also have the talent!
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lualm
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where raymond where....im gonna look for it...sorry if i overlooked .....
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polabola
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awww I read your song/poem raymond and it was sweet and well written ^_^ I love it
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Raymond
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it's almost 2 months and no one noticed my lyric poetry LOL! anyhow, it seems to me that filipino members here have the talent. it shows how frustrated we are with regard to expressing our feelings "cough"got trained because of love"cough"
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polabola
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^^ we are luurve doctors lol
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ilaria82
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U surely are talented!!I wrote smt in all these years,but I'm not yet mentally prepared to share them..it's like showing a part of my self or going in a public place naked,eheh!But I'm confident I'll be able to show what I write one day^^
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polabola
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^^ have faith in yourself even if you think your work is crappy because mistakes is part of it and it makes the work more special^_^ we will be looking forward to your lovely works hehehe
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Raymond
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when writing something, ther'es os many words and ideas that pop up to your mind that you will eventually end up making a very long poem.
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ilaria82
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Thank u guys^^U're so nice >.< Wanna hug u >___<
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polabola
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| Raymond wrote: | | when writing something, ther'es os many words and ideas that pop up to your mind that you will eventually end up making a very long poem. |
I'm one of those poeple your post is pertaining to
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